Well, I've invented a new kind of poetry called "highku". It's exactly the same as haiku, except that instead of referring to the world around us, it refers to a new and alien world. It's basically the inverse of a haiku. A haiku makes us appreciate the world around us. A highku makes us feel terrible that we're not off gallivanting around the universe.
Here are some examples:
Martian seas
The fish fly beneath
The domed sky
Glittering
Ships line up in rows
Vanishing
Horrible!
Teeth, claws, eggs... eggs? Shit
it's a queen
So, waste your work day: what kind of highku can you write? Let's see 'em!
2 comments:
I like the second one. Is the 3/5/3 structure intentional, though? I always thought haikus were 5/7/5.
We usually do them 575 in English because we're a bunch of wussies. I like 353 better.
In 575, you can just go on and on and on...
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